All Comments on 'Another Hot Summer Night'

by Ellafun

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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
So erotic!

Love your work, details, and visualization of the situation.

Keep exploring!

hoo_hoo_boohoo_hoo_booover 13 years ago
thank you

Loved the mood you created, the language tight and so suited. The plot reminded me of summers past and the remedy for sleeplessness was so divine. Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago

Oh my god, Ms EllaFun... I read all 3 of these stories. WOWWWWWWWWW. Very Hot!!! You've definitely given me something to think about when i go to bed tonight. Hope I see you again in the Riddle Ale House.

John.

Ticket2Ride@comcast.net

millhouseBobmillhouseBobover 13 years ago
REALLY HOT!

WOW - you created such a sweltering sensual atmosphere. I have experienced hot humid northeast nights but never THAT hot! But it wasn't quite long enough for me to get off! lol

Series 6Series 6over 13 years ago
Fun Story

I liked it. Just a fun little story. Not too long and to the point.

Probably mislabeled as exhibitionism and voyeur. Toys & Masturbation would have been more appropriate.

*Twisted**Twisted*about 13 years ago
Nice

Very sensual and sexy Ella

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