by Ellafun
Love your work, details, and visualization of the situation.
Keep exploring!
Loved the mood you created, the language tight and so suited. The plot reminded me of summers past and the remedy for sleeplessness was so divine. Thank you.
Oh my god, Ms EllaFun... I read all 3 of these stories. WOWWWWWWWWW. Very Hot!!! You've definitely given me something to think about when i go to bed tonight. Hope I see you again in the Riddle Ale House.
John.
Ticket2Ride@comcast.net
WOW - you created such a sweltering sensual atmosphere. I have experienced hot humid northeast nights but never THAT hot! But it wasn't quite long enough for me to get off! lol
I liked it. Just a fun little story. Not too long and to the point.
Probably mislabeled as exhibitionism and voyeur. Toys & Masturbation would have been more appropriate.