All Comments on 'Another Hotel Bar'

Wow, so hot, so passionate! These guys seem like they've got a powerful connection with each other. Really hope this isn't the end for them. This was an easy *****s. MLF

So many great lines but if I chose a favorite I would go with "Anger and resentment corrode the vessel that carries them," because it’s so very, very true. There’s a heaviness to this but the admission of the “feint” ends this on a hopeful note…to me. Jacks is a complex character. I hope we meet again.

So many great lines but if I chose a favorite I would go with "Anger and resentment corrode the vessel that carries them," because it’s so very, very true. There’s a heaviness to this but the admission of the “feint” ends this on a hopeful note…to me. Jacks is a complex character. I hope we meet again.

This is a great story. It's really well written, and sexy. As a rule, I usually don't read stories over two pages because they tend to get too wordy. But I would not edit anything out. I have a new favorite contributor!

Expertly woven between the sex and what wasn’t completely said out loud, a relationship formed. Whether or not that bond has a future doesn’t really matter. It changed the two of them forever.

The sex is not intense But I am hooked.

Hot, sexy, passionate. What's not to love? Loved it as I have loved every story of yours that I've read.

As with all your stories, this one gives me lots to think about. I hate it when you don’t give me the HEA ending, but I understand why. It would lose the gritty reality. Keep writing, David. I always look forward to discovering what’s next!

Very well written. Great story.