by qualitywheat
I loved it I enjoyed it and the fact that he knocked up both his sister-in-law and daughter-in-law it sounded reaaly great
Top-notch read! Usually, I don't try to dictate to writers as to how they should proceed, but the sister-in-law's pregnancy has got me intrigued. Perhaps a second installment is in the wings?! *****
But got tired of not knowing who people were when first brought into the story. Took long enough to find out what FIL was, when I got to end to see story tags.