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It was settled then. As I plunged into the hot healthy woman underneath me, the one who was going to be my wife, I said, "Louise, I think this is the beginning of a beautiful friendship."
- COMMENTS
SeaChanger4 months agoExcellent till the ending. I don't recognize or feel the cultural stratification that so many authors take for granted in these stories. And this one is an example. True love is orthogonal to the physical characteristics and habits of the spouses, usually bonded by family.
Stubbyone8 months agoWhat a great love story, even though it took place in cyberspace and was never consummated, except for a smoldering kiss. I absolutely loved it. What a clever story line. Your character development was good. Julian’s character was friendly and charming, but that’s what womnizers do. They make you feel special until they’re able to charm the pants off you. Some of the nerds lines were fall down laughing funny. Smart women are sexy. Believe it or not. They don’t have to be pretty to have immense sex appeal. The brain is the ultimate sex organ. Another incredibly easy 5-😊😊😊😊😊’s. Would give 10, if possible. Thank you ❤️
Slider_4816710 months agoNot exactly either of the two possible happy endings I theorized after part one, but entertaining and satisfying.. unless someone has experienced being in- love online with another ( or two like me) they cannot comprehend the emotions that clash between virtual and real loves. Critics, and lawyers, be dammed :-)
justbobkc11 months ago5 stars I had rated previously.
But I really don't think there is a woman in the world who would accept this kind of "chaste romantic chivalrous" love her new man has declared for another woman.
That whole "chivalrous" romance experiment really crashed and burned during the reign of France's King Philip "The Fair" IV. (He was a pretty boy -- not especially "just" or fair that way.)
It was called the "Tour de Nestle" affair and involved his 3 daughters-in-law cheating on their husbands with their "chivalrous knights" in 1314. The actual fallout of all this was pretty much the end of chivalry in real life and ballads and stories. Oh well...
schulz77711 months agoThat guy Julian was now totally different in that chapter. It's not a good writing if you change a character without any explanation.
3 starrs
