All Comments on 'Another Welcomed Guest Ch. 03'

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MaZeWMaZeWover 4 years ago
Is something missing?

The transition between the talk of Ares and Eris and a second later her meeting with Ephus seems very abrupt. And I have seen before when Lit failed and parts of the story were missing. That is why I was wondering

RazzakelRazzakelover 3 years ago

I agree with MaZeW because it went form Ares and Eris talking to immediately her meeting with Ephus, so it makes it really feel like something is missing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
It is like all the characters are in the bitch cheerleader squad smirk, smirk, sneer, smirk. Find some new words.

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Mike9947Mike9947almost 2 years ago

Forever it may be worth, the play bill at the beginning is an annoyance

tinfoilhattinfoilhatabout 1 year ago

This is really getting boring.

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