All Comments on 'Another World Ch. 01'

I thought this was a pretty good story idea and enjoyed reading it. You may want to have someone proof it as there are numerous errors of spelling and phrasing. Correcting these would make reading it that much more enjoyable.

what a hot story. keep up the good work.

Too bad this isn't a novel. Mmmmm... Better than most that I've read lately. Keep it up!!!

Loved it! Nice blend of sci-fi and hot sex! Keep up the good writing! I look forward to reading more of your work. The "bonding" concept made the sex even hotter! Thank You!

Alien love and thought sharing, what fun. A great start to what promises to be a well thought out and written story. I look forward to reading the next chapter. As this is my first foray into your writing and the first story you posted here I have added you to my favorites list. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.