All Comments on 'Any Chance We Could Ch. 09'

by Reindeer58

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digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichover 15 years ago
That's damn hot, is Carol going to get into it to

The sex between Katrina and Scott is some of the best described sex I've read. I really do enjoy the coupling of all four of them. Thanks for the good chapter....Rich

stevieraygovanstevieraygovanover 15 years ago
digdaddyrich, gee, that's a toughie!

Will Carol now get involved too? Hmmmm, I must admit, that is a real puzzler of a question. Call me crazy but after mulling it over for, oh, a quarter of a nanosecond, my guess is...yes, she will! Can you believe it?? Carol, joining the inane dialogue/flirty sex play?? Who would've ever seen THAT one coming?<p>

It's not like I'm not also looking forward to it though. Of course I am. No more though, after Carol. Too many is too many.<p>

Oh, wait. They have the whole pool party thing coming up. No doubt each new girl there will instantly start in with all the same laughably implausible but still lovable antics.<p>

Nevermind! :-)<p>

I really like this story. I've even managed to get past all the really bad dialogue. Mostly. It's becoming a rhythm thing for me, where I've gotten used to the weird call and answer dialogue that infects every thought each character has in this story. I admit I've gotten used to the silly dialogue of Katrina but a lot of times I still find myself wishing that Veronica at least would just STFU. Doesn't matter though. She'll never STFU and I'll muddle through anyway. It doesn't even matter that this is among the most far fetched stories I've ever read. Most of what's happening in this story is so far fetched that even Dean Koontz would say, "Oh, c'mon, that would never happen!"<p>

Doesn't matter any longer. I still like this story. I have no idea how this won't become redundant and tedious as hell once all the pool party girls show up but since I'm hooked on this story now I'm looking forward to finding out.<p>

Thanks for the fun and very different story, Reindeer. Very pleasant fare.

BigPopsBigPopsover 15 years ago
Can't get enough of this story

wish it were coming faster - can't wait for when Scott gets to have all of all of the ladies - being first for two of them and participating in a special four way that I think all of us expect is coming soon.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
chapter 9

i love this story. cant wait to see what happens at the fashion show. update soon!

gotranegotranealmost 13 years ago
Where Did The Pantyhose "Go"?

Another good chapter, but as the subject line indicates, where did the pantyhose go? It was a part of what drew me in to begin with. Maybe it show back up, later.

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