All Comments on 'Any Chance We Could Ch. 23'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
more please

more.

digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichabout 15 years ago
This chapter seemed to drag a bit

Even though it seemed to drag a bit it was good. I think when the author introduces new characters of revisits old ones, there is a lot of background information needed to make them believable, and that could make the story drag a bit.The only problem is that the cast is getting so big, it will be a task to remember who they are and how they fit in, without a refresher on their character. Thanks tor the chapter.......Rich

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