by Reindeer58
This is a great series but its starting to go downhill. The last few chapters have all seemed rushed, there doesn't seem to be the same buildup before sex as there was in the beginning. And I miss that in the story, now it feels like a half a page of story for every two pages of sex and I think that it should be the other way around.
happy that it was not to long between this and the last one. thanks
In the early chapters we saw an excellent story with a few well developed and intriguing characters, now it just seems like a fuckfest with everyone they meet. I'm having trouble keeping track of all the characters, and none of them seem particularly well developed.
Even with the barrage of new characters, the story is still very good with good background information to explain the character. I would like him to have more sex with his daughters, and to finally fuck both of them. Thanks for the chapter................Rich
I know this has been around for a while, but as a new reader I am binge reading this story. I'll just say that it is very enjoyable and I am glad I am not having to wait between chapters.