All Comments on 'Any Work'

I agree the female character never said no, but she never said yes either, so the idea of a consenting loving wife committing adultery is kind of murky in this story. She really just prostituted herself for a hundred bucks. Aren't Australian women worth more than that? The ones I've met sure as hell are! But then, maybe not, to Australian men. Rather childish and impetuous men when it comes to romance and marriage. The shallow and tepid emotions of the Brits, without the class.

So kind of confusing in terms of motives and desire. Really absent any plot, drama, romance, or even eroticism. She came over, I fucked her over, I paid her, she left. Have a nice day. Just empty and crass.

I'm hardly able to speak. That lowered my IQ to lizard level.

A women that pretty only a 100. Boy did she let go cheaply. If you can believe this story can happen.

Why do you keep posting these quick hitters? They have too little background, no real character development, usually involve some ridiculous action by the characters and then they end rather abruptly. You can write pretty well from a technical standpoint. But you continue to turn out these 1 page clunkers. Try to write something longer and better. 1 star.

No comments needed...1*

There are authors I do NOT read. I find their stories reprehensible. Ashson is NOT one of those. What does it say about a commenter who reads and 1-bombs EVERY Ashson story? Crusader Rabbit? Defender of Purity? A Reader who has NO sense of value about his (or her) own time and energy?

Another cutie by Ashson!

Good idea Spit, off to click every one of his links.

and only a Hundred and maybe a repeater in the future. TK U MLJ LV NV

First, let us not have stupid generalisations about Australian men.

Second, this author clearly has a problem relating to women so he writes stories involving rape or sex for favours/money. Very unattractive.

A most enjoyable short story! Well written and thought out! I gave it five stars!

Should have had her on cleanup duty, but loved it!

I'm a fan of the genre and have written several stories in a similar vein to this one... I liked it. Good pace. The girl clearly has a choice so I don't understand what all the negative comments are about. If you don't like the program, change the channel... move on to the next story but getting offended by someone's erotic fantasy on a sex story site is mind boggling to me.

Well done, author. Good story.

and this was one of those times. 5*

. . .or hard work? Gee, I gave it 500 - oops, 5 stars

Think I would have joined her in the shower for round 2

Look at the trouble a young lady can get into when hubbies are cheap!

Amusing anecdote. Well done. Note: there is a large difference in meaning between ‘discrete’ and ‘discreet’. Otherwise, full marks.

Short and sweet, a fun read, thanks.