All Comments on 'Apartment Stories Ch. 05'

I found the *persona* very attractive, convincing, and very nicely rendered. She's a relatively young, complex, urban, female intellectual--with a good stratum of sweetness and warmth beneath the tough exterior. (I also liked her apartment-mate Helin in an earlier chapter.)

It's nice to see intellectuals sympathetically and erotically portrayed in erotic fiction. (I've been attempting the same.) Once again, a very good chapter by a talented writer.