by SEVERUSMAX
That about sums it up. I see the only other comment is spam. That is fitting.
I loved it will be writing more. People who tell you that it's shirt should try and do better.
Really, gay sex just out of nowhere. 1* to punish for mis representing your story.
If you are going to include transgender, tell the reader upfront. Not everyone wants to read about it.
People that believe as the main character does are either not parents, or they are shit parents. Monogamous relationships exist for the safety and well being off children. It's kind of simple to understand. But stupid will stupid.