All Comments on 'Aphrodite's Kiss'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
This is shit

That about sums it up. I see the only other comment is spam. That is fitting.

TIGERWOLFSTORMTIGERWOLFSTORMalmost 6 years ago

I loved it will be writing more. People who tell you that it's shirt should try and do better.

Jackspeed2uJackspeed2uover 4 years ago
Gay sex out of nowhere?

Really, gay sex just out of nowhere. 1* to punish for mis representing your story.

falcon72falcon72almost 4 years ago

If you are going to include transgender, tell the reader upfront. Not everyone wants to read about it.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

girl = no penis. 1 - learn to annotate whats in your story.

OpenWordsOpenWordsover 2 years ago

People that believe as the main character does are either not parents, or they are shit parents. Monogamous relationships exist for the safety and well being off children. It's kind of simple to understand. But stupid will stupid.

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