All Comments on 'Apocalypse Slaves Pt. 05'

Do you know when you will be posting the next chapter of Into the Vampires Harem?

Especially love this:

"I swear I'm gonna kill Henry for all of the Chuck Norris-isms that he's applied to my name." he sighed as he looked upwards as if in askance from heaven.

"You know the Lord God, Chuck Norris?" Lauren said with amazement. "What's He like?"

"Oh please tell me you're joking."

A lot of action; a good and bad-ass, if cheesy hero; and some good smut in there too.

I REALLY like Caine's story. I hope that we get some more references to Lauren and Caine in the rest of the Apocalypse Slave stories that tell us about a deepening relationship, even if we don't get to read about it first hand. I like them.

I've never commented on Literotica before, but I couldn't help to this time.

Love this series! Let the action continue. Five stars!

SQUEEEE!

I didn’t even know that I was in the running for this! I just got the email today notifying me of my placing, giving me my second Blue W on my list! ^.^

Thank you, everyone, who read and voted on this story! You’re the best!

VERY VERY well done. You've obviously borrowed a lot from Fallout but Caine's backstory was brilliantly told. Loving the series.

What an amazing story! The jokes did so much to make me laugh. I would love to see more story to do with Caine! You're an amazing writer.

You need to publish this as a series or something, I swear! So good!

Loving all the references. When you mentioned The Hero of Canton I thought it was just a coincidence, since they Happen all the time. I shouldn't have trusted coincidence.

And then there were the sex scenes. I'll be in my bunk.

awesome story! thanks for sharing it with us.

It made a nice change to read through because this was more of a story than just a lot of fucking ect and with the emergence of Caine the plot thickens. The one thing that I really appreciate about your stories is they are long, anyway thanks once again as I move forward to the next

@Anon Caine Lover

Thank you. I had tried doing the chapter-by-chapter format like other people have done here, and I just can't keep up with it. That's why I never release a story now unless the full thing is written and it can stand alone on its own. WIPs can be found elsewhere. You just have to go to my profile to see where.

Plausibility and heroism blended together made this an excellent chapter. Also, the writing is still fantastic.

The only minor issue is that no raider would ever disembowel themselves. That's an honor thing which they lack. Definitely stepped it up a notch with adding in the myth to the man. 5 stars