All Comments on 'Apples'

by magmaman

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Thanks

Makes us old dudes feel better!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
golden delicious

Nice story. Liked the gentle humour and the subtlety in the references to sex. Looks like you have written a lot. I must read more.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Yup.

Nice little read. A 5 for sure.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
my frend you write to short

when is good you write longer this is better ok? I give good score this is good but i want longer.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago

Very good Apples

eriklovesiteriklovesitabout 13 years ago
awesome

enjoyed your story!

TavadelphinTavadelphinover 12 years ago
Healthy people with some integirty -

Hhmmm.. what a concept -

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6', 186#, published writer. I have worn many hats. As a young man I was crazy, carefree and making wads of money. Then along came a messed up war and I was cannon fodder. From there I came home even crazier, and survived a 120 MPH crash which got me 15 years in a wheelchair...