All Comments on 'April's Fool'

Thanks for the offering.

Would have liked a bit more detail on how Simon found out and where it money came from. It's an enjoyable tale all the same.

Paul grimaces. "No need, old chap. I got quite a substantial sum off your wife's friend." He grins. "Nowhere near a lottery win -- well, not in your league, but--" He grins and gulps his drink. "I'd better get off," he says, rising to his feet. "Send me a postcard from wherever."

and an excellent comeuppance. Stitch that Jimmy.

Really liked how well developed the characters were and their motives. The mention of April blowing up leaves me wanting to know what she said next. Then again maybe she just repeated her old rant.

Leonji

was a blacky afro

1 star

He commits all those crimes and then considers going after the slut? That just seems like a ludicrous idea.

you've never met a Royal Marine, have you?

if you had, you'd know...

Just what the two cheating assholes deserved. Winning the money was good for our embattled husband as it quickened his plans. Cheaters suck.

Superb. Karma is a bitch.

You give no real reasons for either Simon's or her behavior. The story was pointless!

how'd he get three million form stolen debit cards?

Why did he let her have multitude affairs?

Too many questions

Simon hitting the lottery and then dumping his cheating wife is classic. It was a great strategy to change her focus by scaring the hell out of her and getting her dumped by her lover, she'd never see that her husband was ten times the men she was cheating with. Having a friend like Paul is something you would like to have, loyal beyond all else. That's why brothers in arms means a lot more than outsiders can understand. Great story, some of the other comments are so off base because they can't think beyond their own dicks. Thanks again for writing, your work is great and I appreciate it 😜😁👍

just wonderful.justice served