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All Comments on 'Are These Things Planned Somehow? Ch. 03'

by DarcyUK777

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cb1251cb1251about 5 years ago
make up your mind on his name

Alex, Dave or Adam?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago

More please.

instirlingukinstirlingukabout 5 years ago
More names

Sue or Sarah

Aunt Val or Ronnie

Bammerman76Bammerman76about 5 years ago
confused??

Ruined the story at the end as I couldn't figure out who was who as names seemed to change randomly.

DarcyUK777DarcyUK777about 5 years agoAuthor
Apologies

For some unknown (senior moment) I sent the wrong version... unedited one!

Totally my fault and will try to get this resolved if possible.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Typo's happen

Yes there were a few mistake in the third chapter but these things happen and to be honest they didn't slow my hand as I was stroking along!!!!!

The biggest mistake for me was no fourth chapter in which mom and aunts relationship could have been further explored and the potential relationship with Mrs Seymour could also have blossomed maybe even with dad getting some!!!!

jacdmolayjacdmolayabout 5 years ago
So well written

More....much more...please!

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