All Comments on 'Are You Ready?'

Thanks for sharing.

I liked it a lot. It was different than your other stories, and I'm sure you enjoyed writing it. Why didn't we see Collen again though?

You do know how to tell a story, but some of the stories you choose to tell are not worth reading. For me, this was one of them. Some of your other readers may have constructive criticism. I don't know where to begin. I'll keep reading your work ....

Rusalka

Unusual story - well written and constructed.

One point - NAMES: Amy, Beth, Catherine - come on, you can be more creative than ABC

'Are You Ready?'

I have to laugh outloud. How many bloggers over the years, have been complaining about how repetitious your stories are in cloud cuckold land and a palofminery and dotage bondage.

Here you write a clever imagineering of halloween horror and they are complaining that this is too different!

To quote Alexandra Erin - TOMU: Hilaristurbing!

The whole first part involving Catherine was HOT HOT HOT... I felt the kind of shudder you get when a beautiful woman intentionally pretends there's not enough room in an aisle to pass you and slides her body along you in passing... *shudders*...

The past dealing with the dragons... yeah that gave me some shudders too but not the good kind... I guess if this was a Halloween story you did an excellent job of invoking sex and creepy...

Good writing...

I honestly can't rate this one. So I won't. First time ever.

I can't believe you have so few comments on this really good story. I have not long been reading your work but cannot really criticise as I could not write anything as good. It is even hard for me to write a comment without making an error. Thank you so much for work. Yet another great story. Mel B known as Hornydevil47.

i honestly have no idea what to rate this. It was certainly something new. The point where they bit off the penises threw me for a big loop. I certainly enjoyed the story, even though i twas very different than I expected

Interesting. Should be Erotic Horror. I likely wouldn't have selected it to read