All Comments on 'Are You Willing?'

by mralx99

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Outstanding

This is the type of Loving Wife story to enjoy, very erotic. My wife and I have always explored ways to get our motors running to heighten our sex life. Vacation is always a great way to do so. Well done 5 🌟

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Truly enjoyed it...

I really liked the flow of the story.

The dialogue was excellent. (wish there was more of it)

Quotes, to me make the story that much hotter and more realistic.

5*

daylilygardenerdaylilygardeneralmost 6 years ago
Well Written

Is another chapter in the works? The vacation is not over, yet. 5 Stars.

swingerjoeswingerjoealmost 6 years ago
Excellent

Well-written, well-paced, and realistic enough to engross the readers. Well done.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
nope

Typical cliche driven cuck garbage.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Sweet story. I feel my wife would enjoy this.

A five.

DominantYetServileDominantYetServilealmost 6 years ago
could have been good

but then took a weak cucky angle to it. I've said it before and I'll say it again, if you're gonna occasionally have fun with others, if it's another guy for wifey then her husband has to be 100% in charge, not her, and certainly not the other guy. She's her husband's slut, not the other guy's, and all parties need to understand that. Same thing with bringing a woman in for a fling, now wifey is 100% in charge, her husband's cock, tongue, fingers, etc. is her property and it's her call what he can do with it. He's his wife's stud, and all parties need to understand that. Anything else is playing with fire, and the thing about playing with fire is that you WILL eventually be burned, and it will fuck things up for the two of you when it does.

TwentysevenTwentysevenalmost 6 years ago
Enjoyed it

I enjoyed your story and the tension you created. It does, however, rely on the adolescent belief that anything short of penetrative intercourse doesn't count.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Good story

Hope you add part 2

OOAAOOAAalmost 6 years ago
FANTASTIC story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Congratulations!!!!

Are you willing to continue it?

;-)

EasypeterEasypeteralmost 6 years ago

Nothing but anticipation. Super hot !

DAPSlittlelady50DAPSlittlelady50almost 6 years ago
Very sexy and erotic

I liked it very much.

26thNC26thNCalmost 6 years ago
Are you willing

To read this? No.

Impo_65Impo_65almost 6 years ago
That's a very exciting couple

I love couples that have no hang ups and can enjoy all life has to offer. Please continue this story.

jenorma2012jenorma2012almost 6 years ago
sorry

but I did not care too much for this story

27thNC27thNCalmost 6 years ago
Very fun and enjoyable

Nothing beats a couple who are so in love and in tune with each other. It takes a real man not to be threatened by another man. Let's see lots more from this couple, please.

acuriousguy2acuriousguy2almost 6 years ago
I can only give it 5 stars...

One of the hottest I have ever read.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
I can't believe you all believe this story!

This is all made up, fake BS. Try fucking someones ass without douching them first,

anal doesn't work like this. This is fiction not fact, grow up people!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago

He doesn't fuck her ass - he just puts the tip of his penis in ...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago

Way to many couples try this on vacation and to my knowledge it usually back fires with anger and hurt feelings . An old friends cousin and wife were in Mexico and were both being flirty and dancing with others. Mixed with heavy drinking which they normally didn’t do . Both young and attractive but the last night was apparently a disaster. Partied with a bunch of college kids both guys and girls. The end result was him getting a blow job but his was was being fucked senseless by a twenty something on viagra. While riding the guy his friend with an already lubed up dick slide right up her ass . From across the room his wife of 14 years was being dped. He freaked out trying to stop it but they both shot there loads in her then they were looking for her to blow them as h pulled her up . They guys didn’t think about anything they were all just looking to fuck. After a year of fighting the marriage went to filing for divorce. He couldn’t handle the thought of his wife better yet seeing his wife getting fucked . Married couples should keep it to just fantasy because once you cross that line there is no going back. It left a broken up family with a devestated hubby and wife who aside from that was a very loving couple

rodryder44rodryder44over 5 years ago
Are U Willing?

Great, suspenseful, he's gonna make her do it! Damn the consequences. Its his fault she's becoming a slut. Way to go 5*****s

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Hot story

one of the best I ever read here.

But couples should stay for only imagination if they really love the Partner.

kiteareskitearesover 5 years ago
Wow angry nony thinks you all missed the end

"This is fictional story..."

Maybe because of the typo, the meaning changed?

Fun story, hubby could be written to go 1 way or other, take better control or let wifey or Mark take control. I think after wifey's reaction in the bar she should tell hubby he needs to be in charge to out alpha any other males that might sniff about and make sure the know who's wife she is and who is allowing whatever they get up to.

Setting up a safe word and both acknowledging to each other each has a veto would be a good place to go from.

Given other postings, it maybe that there isn't going to be a 2nd chapter, which is a shame.

mrscotlandmrscotlandover 4 years ago
Wow

Absolutely loved this story, very hot, erotic and sexy! I was hard the entire reading! Too bad the Cabana Boy didn’t get a chance to fuck her!

BeauReadyBeauReadyalmost 3 years ago
Nasty!

A nasty wife who knows how and when to stop; what should be fantasy and what should be reality! The perfect woman, sigh!

Thanks - 5* stars!

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