All Comments on 'Arian's Pool Ch. 02'

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Anonymousalmost 8 years ago

Love the story

You've got a great story -- lots of room to develop love and sex! Love the "rough hair on Mike's broad, defined chest"! (I really love guys with hair on the chest!) Keep writing. Great description. Mike seems a great guy!

rightbank almost 7 years ago

"There's Something in the Water"

Has to be.

Perhaps it's time to talk to the local folk?

rightbank almost 7 years ago

Surprised She Still Doesn't Know When To Expect Him

She says she doesn't know the number for her telephone? Call his phone from hers.

Does this also mean they never talk during the week he's in the city?

KaereniSister over 6 years ago

"...as mad as a suitcase full of ferrets." That has got to be the best descriptive line I have read in a long time. As for the comment about not knowing her number, I have lived where I am now for 2.5 years and I still don't know my home number. Great story so far.

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