All Comments on 'Arian's Pool Ch. 04'

Get the feeling that Androgynousother is a bit of a hopeless romantic as well as being an excellent writer! 5*!

A very enjoyable read. I really like your writing. Some minor typos that could be caught with a proof reading. 5 well deserved stars.

and I also couldn't help but recite this with a welsh accent! (said in a welsh accent!)

Just lovely...;)

I'm so happy Mike returned -- sexy Mike with the "rough, coarse" chest hair. Maybe another baby? Certainly lots of sex! Loved the story!

5*

Location location location, first rule of real estate, and love stories to. Having coffee in our city backyard just won't be the same.

Thanks

.... Fairy story, told so well

Thank you.

A wonderful story, simply and beautifully told.

This is another author shoes work deserves a wider audience!

Thank you so much.

A really good, easy, comfy, feet-up read. What a pleasant way to waste a couple of hours.

Some typo's but didn't detract from the overall high quality work here. As other commentators have already said, I could see this (with some of the sexier bits toned waaaay down!) on TV. 5 stars.

This is a great story. What I liked the best was the use of what I call "Welsh English". It was a significant contribution to the overall story. A few words were new to me none of them broke the story flow. Excellent choice of characters and outstanding character development. Benny was a great addition. Thanks for sharing.

Thank for your stories that I have recently discovered and have enjoyed, I totally agree with the comments made by 'Anon' 12/9/17, [I do wish that people that give comments state their names]

Other than the long intro, this was probably one of the best stories I have read here. It totally brought me into their reality with just the right descriptions of each setting.

This was brilliant.

I've read everything you have written and I want more.

Romance is so overlooked, this series was wonderful. Thank you.

You've written some beautiful love stories, hut this is one of your finest.

I absolutely loved this series, would love to see it continued for a couple of more children for the couple. Second series of yours I've read and will read more, it's refreshing to not read about cheating spouses. Great job, keep it up.

A bit mystical and sweet for my taste,

but good enough to excuse that.

Wonderful story telling - indeed quite magical. Certainly in my mind a prize winner. You write so well nans we are lucky that you share your stories with us all.

Different, but excellent 5*

A delightful fairy story.

What a lovely tale.

Brilliant story, look you!

Great story. Thank you!

Loved the magic, family caring, women's caring and support for each other.

A fantastic love story with a bit of everything, thank you for writing it.

Romance, hot sex and magical realism… Brilliant!