All Comments on 'Arja'

You are a god of writers, keep it up. Can we see more stories on these two wonderfull women?

I would buy your work and enjoy turning the pages time and again. You are amazing! Thank you!

Hi, I did enjoy this. It is hard to find this combination without certain hentai cliches we don't always need :)

One criticism: overuse of the words rubbery and wealthy. You could use other words with the same meaning or find other aspects to describe.

Suggestion: the magic at the end was a bit random. Perhaps they could have been gifts earned over the night somehow? It could be hinted that the other women had gifts also, each different.

...for the enjoyable read, very entertaining.

peterpan and anony have both made suggestions that I agree with. One for the

technical merit and the other because I too would like to read more about these

two sweet ladies and the possible future you choose for them. Make it good !