All Comments on '"Arresting" Officer Pt. 02'

I always loved "Arresting" Officer, and the second chapter brought tears to my eyes.

personally the more the story progresses I prefer more "story" and less sex.

If you manage to capture our attention to start with it's the characters and developments that bring the "crowd" back.

like I said IMO

Dear Author, Except for the glitch with Celeste referring to him as "her husband" at the funeral, I truly enjoyed the mix of hard sex and love story you wrote. Nice job and another five for your efforts. Thank you for taking me along for both halves of the story. Will look forward to Hawaii. jntiques

Damn I love theses two!!

wonderful

It's amazing to see how far you've come as a writer. The first chapter was OK but I'm really glad I read the second chapter. I look forward to reading more about Davis and Emily.

I loved the characters and the story and I am looking forward to more in this story.

Well written,next chapter soon.

I absolutely loved this story. I can't wait to read about their trip to Hawaii.

This story was great I hope to read another follow up real soon

This is another example of a great author and how he has grown. The first installment of this series was very good. This one shows how he has grown e.g. character development in 3 years.

Excellent work, loved the way you finished! Thank you :)

Both your two "police lady" stories are great. Thanks

This story really shows how much your writing improved over the years. Not that the first part was bad. Far from it, just that this part is written so well.

Great story that had me a little teary eyed at the end. Lots of feeling and loving made it another of your best. Thanks

Another great story. I'm no expert but thought the emotions portrayed by Davis as the partner of a serving police officer were totally realistic. Time for another chapter.

Loved both chapters. Although you did fib to us a bit...You said at the end of Chapter 2 that you wouldn't make us wait as long for Chapter 3 as we did for Chapter 2 ;))

This a fine story, however chapter 3 is still unavailable over 3 years later! When will it arrive?

I loved it but I am just an old romantic. My wife of 38 years passed away a few years ago but I still remember the love and tenderness we had for each other just as in these stories.

The writing is well crafted but selecting law enforcement as a high risk occupation? Job related mortality for law enforcement is not that great being lower than construction workers for example. I suppose applying the same concerns around demolition working or working on electrical lines, takes away some of the romantic appeal. Answered my own point!

Great story

THANKS

Damn it's a shame you didn't continue this. You promised that it wouldn't be as much of a wait as it was between Part 1 and 2, but that ship seems to have sailed a while ago. Maybe covid hit you hard, as you haven't uploaded anything on here since before that. Whatever the reason is, I don't hold that against you, but hopefully you'll come back one day to finish this story

Thank you, I enjoyed part 2.

Just as poor as part one.

Beautiful und Romantique!

11/10!!!!!

What a wonderful tale, A Cop and a writer. The only disappointment is that here we are some 5 years later and no follow-up continuation of this lovely story. 5/5

Emily married a weak wimp....a wimp who gets turned when consoling a grieving wife who just lost her husband....not much 9d a story.....sweet and fucking boring

SO IT'S OKAY TO KISS ANOTHER WOMAN'S MAN FULL ON THE LIPS IN FRONT OF HIS WIFE EVEN IF YOU ARE A GRIEVING WIDOW!!! COPS SHARING.....DAVIS IS A MAN SLUT

Hoping we get a follow up with the wedding and the children they make growing up.