All Comments on 'Arribada of Love'

I struggled somewhat with some of the grammar, but on an overall, I very much enjoyed your story... Very well written, and I loved the pace of the story... Please continue to write... Am looking forward to more of your stories...

Great slow paced love story.

teasing and tenuous, there is a beautiful inevitability about it. Good enough for me to forgive you the formatting glitches, and some wrong word use ('Taught' when you meant taut for example.)

You're a good writer. You have the potential to be even better. Keep writing.