All Comments on 'Art Deco Pt. 02'

I look forward to Chap.3 but I wanted to point out one thing. I know this is a fantasy, but a reader might get the idea that going from rectal to vaginal contact is okay. If fact, in can cause serious infection.

Keep up the great work.

... As you say, it is just fantasy; hopefully we are all aware of the possibility of infections from some of the actions I have described. I'm trsuting that people will view this as pure fantasy and not as a thesis for sex education!

Point taken though. I agree that in reality, any contact with the nether regions should be treated with the utmost care in respect of hygeine in order to avoid STD's or worse.

Yes, I agree with the previous Anonymous. One has to be careful when one plays.

While your writing shows a great potential, you, just like your character, need some serious "training," ;-). Great fantasies work because they are made believable and "realistic."

And again, while I understand fantasy, I find some parts uncomfortably close to "scat."

Keep writing.