All Comments on 'Artificial Affection Ch. 01'

I'd never thought I would say this, but poor guy. This can so easily get way worse, corse that vic girl is to blame as well. I like what you have written so far, it will be interesting to see where you take it.

Read quite a few stories about impregnation. This is easily one of the hottest. I really hope you'll continue this one.

Keep up the great work. Hope to read more. Its an interesting teist for sure and i cant wait to see how tgis mess resolves itself.

Keep it up. And add more women in his harem. You can do so much with this story.

-he can dose a rich woman to have money

-he can dose a female cop investigating the case

-he can dose a female professor to create the antidote

You need to upload the next chapter, please include the reveals when the girls tell them they’re pregnant!!!

Just hate smart characters that continually make the dumbest mistakes but it’s your story.

I really loved this story and I agree with other readers you can do so much more with this story. here are a few ideas.

- tweak the virus so that there isn't a need to get pregnant or die

- add gene therapy to the virus that changes the women and himself

- have the tweaks make it so the pheromones he puts off because the cologne was absorbed by his body are permanent and he can influence people either a little or a lot kind of like mind control and make them believe what he wants.

- the virus and the tweaks to it change his body maybe gets taller, bigger cock, more muscles, unlimited cum production, able to control if he gets someone pregnant.

- he and the women get smarter, live a lot longer and basically become a more evolved human and their children are even more so than them. maybe as time goes on they are able to access parts of their brain that will enable them to do things like read peoples minds and things like that. there are all sorts of ways this story could be extremely hot and entertaining