All Comments on 'Artistic Licentious'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Very Good!

Please continue.....

huhminahhnortonhuhminahhnortonalmost 9 years ago
This story is worth developing.

I hope you expand upon it.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
who?

Who the hell is doing the talking? Why don't the entries have names to coordinate the story with the actors?

This has to be the DUMBEST of progressive attempts at "Nuart" ever. It could be interesting if one had an inclination to what or who did the talking/acting

CeltiCeltiabout 5 years ago

@Anonymous of 6-Mar-2019: Oh please, it's blindingly obvious that the story starts with Camille (the artist), the next paragraph switches to Audrey (the model), and then it continues alternating.

Far from being "NuArt", this sort of alternation has a long literary tradition; and there is no reason to dumb down a story to the lowest common denominator of reading ability just because you want to wank to it.

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