All Comments on 'As I Want You to Be Ch. 03'

I really love this series so much, it seems so real. It was nice of Kay to show concern about LJ. I hope the next chapter will b more interesting.

Great work!

threesome

Well Done!

thank you

I love the story and I love the author's explicit style of writing. I just added her to my list of "favorite" writers.

This really had the perfect balance of super hot sex and real world complexity.

The family conflict and Kay's intervention was actually the highlight of this chapter for me - ok, I'm lying, the sex scene would be hard to eclipse - but it does add a new depth to the story and to Kay.

As much as I don't love that Kay needed more playmates, it does fit with her character and history, so I'm just going to accept her as she is... Not as I want her to be :)

I loved that you added Kay to the story...super hot scenes. The way she handled the parents was magical and in some cases true to life, sad to say. Love Your Work!!!

I love when story lines have connected characters and so your work has become a favourite of mine.

Love Kay, her proclivities makes her unique and damn if it wasn't hot how she handled everything that happened, from walking in to a naked Mia to helping LJ and handling her parents. Brilliant bit of writing there. Keep it up, you're doing wonderfully.

Thanks for sharing. Looking forward to more.

IDB.

Is this series set before, during or after the My GF series? I really hope its set before because I don't like the idea of Kay cheating, but it goes with her character. Either way, love your stories.

Can't wait to read the next one.

I appreciate all the comments. I know there was a lot of non-sex to read through in this one, but I've come to like LJ and didn't want to short change her.

This chapter is set between the two timelines in My GF. I know y'all hate the cheating and you're right to, but I promise it's needed and to continue to make it as palatable as possible.

This is a brilliantly-written very sexually erotic story, and I love the way it's going, well done!!!

I can't wait to read ch. 04, to find out what's next for LJ, and how Mia, reacts to finding all of LJ's clothes in her living room...

Oh and protect the puppy! I can so identify with that emotion...

Love and Kisses Gay Paige.

How long does it normally take you to write a story? The suspense kills me everyday

I knew it! That reference to "Kay" in chapter 2 could mean only one thing...Trouble!

That damn Kay has shown her red head in this story also, that bitch! She's such a cheating, horny slut...I love her! I wish a piece of space debris would land on her, but I love her.

She shows up like the aunt you don't talk about, screws everything including the neighbors cat, takes charge and fixes all problems, then down the road she goes, leaving you an exhausted reader, but cheering for her to come back. Where's the Tylenol?

Great imagination, good writing, and delicious storytelling as only you do, keep me wanting more.

A big Thank You for all your hard work and for sharing your talents with us!

Doc

I really enjoyed this chapter, as I did the others. I thought the unexpected twist of Kay helping LJ was both fantastic and realistic. I think it's amazing how you build the characters and make them believable. One of the best things about your writing style is the smooth transitions between the characters, giving us a bit of what each one is feeling/thinking/doing without being choppy or forced. To top it all off, the sexual encounters are steamy and original. I hope you keep writing- and thank you for a great read. ^_^

I really love this part more than anything as I see myself in mia and fantasizes the same things which you wrote here with great minute details....I really beg you to please please please please please please right next part with kay and lj both pounding mia's holes...

I check to see if this has updated like once a week! Please bring part four! :)

I keep revisiting this story and yet there isn't a continuation and a proper ending which it deserve...

Please...

Sadly, you created great stories but left it unfinished... ironically its the stories with Kay in it. I know what happen why you hadnt post any follow but pls both this and GF needs it well deserve follow up and ending.

Curious, though did Kay meet Mia before Jenny??? Certainly hope so... I like Faithful Kay there... in that story.

It needs to be finished, please!

Damn good and very hot.

Have to agree thou, want more!

I hope you revisit this and continue the tale.

xo

Tell us what happened with Mia & LJ.? This story has growing pains. Nurse it .

PLEASE more. 🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹 dozen roses. 5🌟's

Such a shame that LJs parents threw her out, but it's an all too well scenario for most that come out; online or in real life. I'm glad Key was nice enough to help her out the way she did, and I agree with everyone that there needs to be a part 4 as well. So many questions unanswered: did LJ finish school? Did her coming out affect both her tennis scholarship, and acceptance into the college? Did LJ reconcile with her parents? We need answers.

Kay is my favorite character ever.

Wow, so much so soon.You answered my previous question.

I like Kay lol