All Comments on 'As You Wish Ch. 04'

The End? I really didn't want this to end, ever... But I like the ending... Maybe you could add a few more scenarios in the middle...not wildly crazy, but kinda like the traffic police lady one....

Great work though, I loved it.

Thanks. Yeah, it is shorter than my normal stories, but I had always intended it to be. Honestly, it was originally only supposed to be three chapters, to represent the three wishes. But it got a little big for that. I have a bad habit of extending a story out farther than I'm inspired to write it. So, I'm trying to get better at that. I am seriously considering a spin off following April and her wishes though.

you are beautiful

and thank you for being alive

Thank you. That is one of the most interesting compliments I have ever gotten. lol

That did not go as I expected... it was even better!

Fits right up there with my favorite short djinn story, from The X-Files of all places.

Well done !

I liked the twist and it was just a really good take on a djinn story in general.

Thanks for writing such an enjoyable story.

Thanks for the compliments. I always try to subvert expectations when it would make since. I'm happy you liked the twist. I had it planned out from the beginning, but I wasn't able to drop as many hits as I would have liked, so I'm happy it still worked out. I used to watch the X-Files, but I'm afraid that is not one that I remember.

That devolved quickly. You could have played with that power for a few more chapters and the ending was rushed.

Yea, I could have written more, but I had always intended this to be a shorter story. I originally meant for it to only be three chapters for the three wishes, but the second chapter got a little out of hand. And, you're right, there are so many other places I could have gone with this story, but I write when and where I'm inspired too. If I would have pushed this story farther, I'm afraid the quality would have waned. Thanks for the feedback though.

This series really made laugh hope you make sequel.

Thanks. I did originally intend for this to be on the humorous side. I have two other stories currently in the works, so it will probably be a while before I get back to this one with a sequel. But I have thought about where I could go with it.

Hey this was a great story, a lovely ending and got me hard as fuck at points too. Thanks :)

Thanks. I'm happy you liked it so much.

The...um...'Eros Touch' ability demanded some sort of reset button wish for number 3, which is quite a cliche in wish fulfillment stories with genies (and monkey paws), so I liked the way you cleaned things up without just undoing everything. Well done.

Thanks. I really appreciate that. I thought the same thing. I agree, these stories tend to end with everything going back to the way they were before with everyone learning to love what they have. I purposefully was trying to avoid that.

Interesting ending... 5 Stars!!!

Thanks.

STHSTH,

X-files episode. Mulder found a genie. His first wish was for world peace and he ended up being the only person in the world. so the second wish was to undo the first wish. the third wish was to free the genie. Happy ending.

John