All Comments on 'Ashley and Her Brother Ch. 02'

Love this one that was a very hot story . Keep it up . You have a very good story going .

dutch513

Keep it up

Loving this story so much. It hits a lot of my buttons with older brother/younger sister and dom/sub as well. I look forward to reading more!

More please, loved how willing both brother and sister are.

Plus the way she obeys his wishes.

Beautifully written .

Please write Chapter 3!

Love this story.

the story is good but, you are a little rough and feelingless for someone you are suppose to love dearly . I wouldn't have done it to her , she did do it you . I would ask her if she was all right with it first , you do what you want its your story

waiting for more

Very nice pacing and believable dialogue. It was an exciting read. I hope you continue this.

more. more. more

I want to know if you ever fucked him or is this all made up and not real.. Either way it was hot.