All Comments on 'Ashley and Her Brother'
by kinkyashley07
- 13 Comments
dutch513almost 11 years agoNot bad but it needed to be longer .Not much of a fan of the one page stories . It's a really good story and I hope you plan to add to it . Keep writing and I'll keep reading . Thanks dutch513 .
Anonymousalmost 11 years agoA well-packed episode....and I especially appreciate its brevity.
skip2951almost 11 years agohot and well written...could feel the emotions you were feeling and the lust.....part 2 soon please......
worshipper622almost 11 years agoYour writing has depth. The complaints are from "strokers."
beguiled999almost 11 years agoI like it and I would definitely read more. I like the addition of the BDSM. I actually think that works well in some incest stories.
cassiecalmost 11 years agoI hope you continue on with this story! I agree that it would be better if it was longer. But I still loved it. 5 stars!
Anonymousover 10 years agoSo very well written. You can just so feel the lust and emotion. It was a hell of a tease them not going further this time but it's a good reason for part 2. I'll be reading it!
Anonymousover 10 years agoVery well written and I love the story. I hope there are some true aspects of it. I had a similar experience with my sister. Email me if you want to discuss it. Hou Tx m30 at g mail dott com.
gialuv24over 10 years agoGreat job....I'm looking forward to reading the next continuation of this story.
It left me very wet...Thank you!
Kisses, Gia
Anonymousover 10 years agoI will admit that I wish it was longer. ONLY because it is so very well written and enticing! It left me hungry for more! SO PLEASE CONTINUE WITH CHAPTER 2 QUICK!!!1
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