All Comments on 'Ashley Helps Out'

write more that was hot

Great story. U really have talent. You should write more :)

Good one!

wheres the rest of the story this needs atleast two more chapters to properly finish it off. what happens next? do the parents find out? do they continue? does she get pregnant? does he move in with her? what about the little sister? stop being lazy and either finish the story now or delete it now half a story is worse than no story at all and this is much less than half.

Calls for 2 or more chapters more.

Its almost fitting that Ashley and Mike became sibling lovers,and Ashley possibly concieving their baby,but truth-be-told I think Younger Sister Allison and Mom should join in so the whole family can enjoy incestuous delights,and have Mike father their babies as well.

And have them all sleep in Mom's bedroom and share each other and Mike constantly,the way a close family should be.Could anything be more beautiful than that?

Average at best, nothing new.

Another writer who doesn't know that only about 5% of a cumshot comes from the testicles.