by Rembacher
Ashley would be smart enough to stay with a Master.
DAMSEL on top Approved
A well told story. If someone was looking to find fault they couldn't find it here.
Yeah, the 'tradesman' remark was unfortunate. Just call him a 'loser' or a 'goat roper!' Actually, the observation that the Hero had always seen the Asshole stoned is quite sufficient. It was a nicely done piece. A bit long in areas which could have been shorter (and vice versa!) But all in all, nicely done!
5*