All Comments on 'Ashley's Secret Ch. 02'
by pusylvr69
- 8 Comments
Anonymousalmost 15 years agoI absolutely enjoy these two chapters. The only improvement that I can see is for them to be posted at ASSTR or somewhere that posts a chapter as one piece. The way Literotica busts a chapter up into 2, 4, 10 or more chunks makes it a pain to read and download for future enjoyment. But that is not the author's fault. To the author, Job Well Done!
Shikealmost 15 years agoI've really enjoyed both chapters of this story so far. I am anxious to read what happens to Ashley next.
Anonymousalmost 15 years agoWELL WRITTEN WITH TERRIFIC SEXUAL DETAILS AS IN ALL PUSYLVR STORIES,LOVED IT,HAVE TO MASTURBATE EVERYTIME I READ ONE OF HER SEXUAL TALES.MORE PLEASE.
Anonymousabout 13 years agoRead it on my bed while humping my dildo d-e-e-e-e-p into my pussy! Orgasms constant and sooooo intense! Thanx a million
leann511almost 12 years agoFor a story written under a "lesbian" label, do you imagine any percentage of your readers give a rat's ass about a character named John? That sounds more like a man and what possible function would a man have in a lesbian story? If you want to write bisexual stories or group love stories, just label them as such and people who like lesbian stories would not have to be bothered scanning twelve pages of dialogue to see if the story holds any interest. It serves to make readers of lesbian stories mad when they forced to waste so much time, And it discourages readers who like bisexual and group stories from even reading it because they are led to believe it is a lesbian story.
Anonymousover 11 years agoGreat story..well written! And leann511 i think you are looking for a man-hater section. This is a great story in a great category.
