All Comments on 'Ashley's Secret'

Really very hot -- well done! Hope to read more about the rest of their time together. Definitely left me wanting to find out what happens next. Thanks!

...or how else could you have spent so long on such drivel? <BR><BR>You over-describe every single detail, and do so in a way that makes your story fit for an elementary student's comprehension level.<BR><BR>Suggestion? Leave writing to WRITERS, and stop pretending you know the first thing about it!

Someone "in the south" seems to have a problem with my writing style. If you don't like my style of "drivel", please move on to some other author. You have commented before but fail to identify yourself. That's fine, but really, there are plenty of authors on here that you can read. By the feedback that I receive, you seem to be the only one with a problem with my stories. I usually delete your comments, but I will leave this one posted and see what we can hear back from other readers. For those that like this story, please leave some positive feedback. Thanks!

Loved it!! Very well written and I see no drivel what so ever. In fact I would give you better than 100 if it were possible. Grammar, punctuation, spelling were all top notch, something that is hard to find in 90% of the stories posted here.

Keep bringing us these great offerings.

Thank you for a great read.

I happen to like the details, maybe because I enjoy sex unlike you anonymous. Keep up the good work pus! :D

I love it! When will the next chapter be out?

Best story I've read in a long time!!!!!!!! One of the best on the site!! Exceptional well written and the details are what make the story. You can see it happening in your mind like a movie. That's how writers do and are supposed to write, South! You still pissed off over losing the war or something?

I'm so excited. I just finished and I think it's great. I just happen to live in the South, too and I have now idea what "anon's" problem is. Please keep up the good work.

This is an exceptionally well written story. I just could not stop reading until I reached the end. And I certainly look forward to reading the rest of the series. Well done!

I love this chapter! I feel like walking into Lasenza or Ann Summers and asking for a job! Love it... Looking forward to chapter 2 :)

Your writing is intoxicating and so well thought out. Waiting for more chapters and watch the evolution and expansion...

YUM!

I hope that the author will write about experiences with John amd her aunt!

This was by far the best lesbian-bisexual story that I have ever read..

Being male I would love to experience both the bisexual and woman on woman experience that is to come.

I need to cum so bad. Congratulations pusylvr, you're a sensational writer.

Give me more!

SMOKING and VERY hot...and also loved the details...certainly a creative "21-year old..."

The basher brought me up short...but of course it's anonymous

really looking forward to your other posts, and curious if you've any favorites

HIGH PRAISE! She writes really yummy hot stuff-LOS of H's-!

5 stars. love the story

pretty good. not enough suspense.

You are another one of the AVERGE lesbian authors who believes that one of your main lesbians has to have very-small breasts. You are like sheep - - you follow the herd that says one of the lesbians has to have small breasts, and you just bob your heard, Also, it is your way to belittle and degrade lesbians, to make them appear to be unattractive, less than desirable. Proof? Is there a way your story would change if the lesbian with small breasts had average-sized breasts, normal-sized breasts? Hell, no! You are just so AVERAGE that you follow what most other lesbian authors write. (Actually, I just standing up for my lesbian sister and lesbian friends. They encounter people lday in and day out, and it gets so old to them to run into such AVERAGE people like you. Hell yes, I gave you a one-star rating - - what would you give to such an AVERAGE writer??

A previous commenter says that small breasts are unattractive. That is a personal opinion I certainly don't share. I think that commenter should look at herself. She is obviously the one that thinks small breasts make a woman less attractive. And that is so wrong.

Blessed thou art, thou hast received a favorable comment from DAB32697!

I expect more from thee.