All Comments on 'Ashley's Tale - Demon's World 03'

Just plain and simply wonderful. Please keep it up I'm hooked. It's actually one of the few stories where I skim through the set parts just to get back into the story itself, not that the set parts aren't well written I'm just in this for the tale itself.

Great job!

Ashley might consider making Harmon younger to put off the need for a leader replacement for a thousand years or so. And continue to check in on Lori once in a while. Ashley can think of it as part of her cop's regular beat.

Devon is problematic. He used to bang Ashley's mother, Sandy. Now he wants to do Ashley, and she's thinking if the others like him, they might make him part of the group unit? I guess with the long lives, that generational thing is less of a factor. Of course, Bonnie and Ashley have to approve Gloria, so that should be a chapter or two. What fun lies ahead!