All Comments on 'Ashley's Temptations'

I really enjoyed this introductory part as it's left me on the edge of my seat to find out more. I'm going to say a little fast paced for my personal tastes but honestly that's just me; it worked well and felt credible (again my preference).

I have to say I loved her confidence and sass, with the seduction idea being very clever and playful indeed - the lack of communication was a great little kink I liked more than I realised I would. You wrote that blow job scene extremely well to say the least.

And as a final comment, your writing in general flows in a way that makes me forget I'm even reading and just lets me enjoy the story fully.

I do hope you continue.

Beautiful!!! Must be more.

You show a gift for making the story flow quickly and making me forget that this is a virtually impossible scenario. 5 stars and more chapters, please!

Aww thanks to all of you who love the story. This Ginger Girl is very flattered, and there WILL be a Chapter 2 coming.

a wonderful narration..not a word was superfluous..ultimate in fantasy..do bring out the other chapters though they will be 'hard' challenges!

Every man's fantasy.

Nice quick ride