All Comments on 'Asking for It'

Oh wow, this story started out amazingly! I love a Dom's "angry touch," as you put it. The whole build-up of the story got me desperately wishing I could experience this in real life! My only complaint is that it ended far too quickly! I wish there had been so much more. The dialogue was great. I love how threateningly Ben's words came out. "Baby if you wanted me to play rough you only had to ask. You think I don't know what you were doing?"... Made me shiver with a tinge of fear and a smile. Please keep writing!