All Comments on 'Aspiring Model Gets Used Ch. 04'

by PrimeOptimal

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onsipinonsipin4 months ago

I really enjoyed the tension Luke had with himself and how he started as put off by everything to eventually admitting he loved it. Very hot scenes between him and Frank as well!

captainfalconwritercaptainfalconwriter4 months ago

Amazing chapter... I will come back to this story a lot of times in the future. I just knew it.

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

an incredible return to what made your series the best here. the way he succumbs emotionally, and romantically is excellent. can't wait for the final chapter, hope he falls in love with frank without the typical sex slave dynamic!

JP0920JP09204 months ago

Such a great story! So hot and can’t wait to see what comes next, and to follow your future submissions

PrimeOptimalPrimeOptimal4 months agoAuthor

Thanks for the feedback! Been really busy, but I'm definitely working on editing the last chapter. Also have another story lined up

RSchwulerRSchwuler2 months ago

Fantastic work. Really enjoyed the raunchiness of this series. It's very hot to me when there's a serious contrast in the dom and sub, and the spectacle here of the naive young model getting completely violated the vile old man got me rock hard. Loved all the spit as well. Can't wait for part 5.

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