All Comments on 'Assisting My Lactating Bhabi'

Many readers may not enjoy the theme of the story but it is well written and I encourage the author to continue writing and posting.

Indian sexuality should be a fruitful source of great erotic fiction.

Slow down a little and develop the story line, perhaps an editor to help with structure. More for this story, please!! :-)

English is, obviously, not the writer's primary language. Much better than I or probably 99 percent of my fellow readers could do in his primary language. I would be forced to use a Translation App and hope for the best. I applaud the effort. 4****s

For once I totally agree with other comments !

very nicelly writen and need a little development...

As of mother tongue i'm french so ...

Very nice story. Hope to hear more from you!

Your S-I-L seem unsatisfied, ask her to sleep with me once

It seems you don't know how human milk tastes like?

Sexy

Did your loving, lovely, and lover Bhabhi become pregnant with your baby?