All Comments on 'Asymmetry Ch. 02'

I hope this goes on more

generally i'm not into longer stories but you've got me hooked. please keep building this story it's very hot and looks to get hotter. please keep writing you seem to have a talent for it. good luck and thank you!

You're creating a building wave of passion which of course can only be resolved by a Chapter Three!

Keep your paragraphs short as you are doing--much easier reading...and I'd hope you keep focused on her reactions to each new sensation.

Marvelous work so far!

I'm dirtyfantasies Literotica editor. She is eager to learn and clearly brought talent and skill to the process. I always look forward to her chapters on several levels:

* The developing story

* Her images and similies

* How she integrates my suggestions from previous chapters

Enjoy!

Felt like was the one sitting next to Conrad!

Tess (UK)

And of course there's a fucking guy in a story labeled as "lesbian". Because that makes perfect sense.