All Comments on 'At Last'

For a first attempt this is promising. Good build-up and all believeable.

I would love to read more of it. Please continue!

I can't wait to read more.

Thanks for your story. I really enjoyed this one. The pace of the story was good and it paid off in the end. I would enjoy reading more.

A very well thought out and written story. I definitely look forward to reading more of your work. As this is my first foray into your writing and the first story you posted here I have added you to my favorites list. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.