All Comments on 'At the Beach'

which of course was simply awesome. This story, unlike so many other mother/son incest fantasies, seems credible, loving and compelling. Compelling in the sense that I care what happens between them above and beyond the big "O".

Thanks for the wank.

Geat story, very erotic! However, women don't have milk fill jugs, no matter how hard you suck them. Only if they have recentrly given birth.

It a good story what happen beyond that. So posibble put ch. 02 Thanks crh

Very nice build up, very erotic.

the story was awesome, best i read in a long time. but if i may say so you should take more time with it, don't cram all the action into one single day but distribute the events over several days, let the feelings build up. and maybe you could try and make it a bit more realistic, i mean her fucking a strange girl in sight of him and on a beach full of people....was hot but a bit unreal. looking forward to oyur next chapter

Summertime is cooling down here in Canada, but your story sure heated it up some. I loved the long, slow buildup to the afternoon at the beach. Who cares about mom's breast milk. Don't know if you're the kind of writer who wants to continue this storyline, but consider this. Another day at the beach for John and his mom. Only this time there is a hot sandwich with Sam between John and dear mum. All the best with your writing.

Never left a comment before. This is the best I've read on Literotica. Keep it up!

I am a fan of mother and son stories and this is one of the best. Please keep writing more mother-son stories. I would like to read some stories where the story builds over a longer period of time. Maybe one where the son makes his mother submit, but she ends up loving it.

I liked 99% of your story. The lactation was a nice figurative event but totally unrealistic. That said, I look forward to a Part 2 where maybe Mom gets pregnant, or John exerts more control over his mother and has her repeatedly in and out of thwir house.

Let's follow up on Mom and Son's antics at the beach on another HOT day and have them re-encounter Sam, and then get her directly involved in the action.

And I note that you have now established that Mom is anally erotic. Let's not overlook that aspect.

And now that Mom is lactating, let's include Sam among her milk-starved babies. Not that Mom's cunt-juice isn't sweet syrup as well!

"He wore a t-shirt and a bathing suit with nothing underneath."

Do you usually have something underneath your bathing suit?

Great story!!!! The screw at the end was fabulous.. Mom and son french kissed as her filled his own mothers pussy with sperm!!!!!! awesomely sensual. The best sex ever mom and son.

Wow!

Took my breath away!

Stunningly good!

An excellent read, taboo eroticism, tense build up, great story!

I'd love to read a follow-up story to include inviting Sam back with the two of them.

Write More.

That's the reason this is just a fantasy, a beach you can fuck your mother on and not be a very closed area.......A good read but just a fantasy.......LAROC

This is a great story of hot motherfucking, by a gifted writer. I'm glad that dumbass John finally caught on to what his mother was after (a good guess: it's what was jumping around in her boy's pants). Okay, he's an 18 year old kid, but why was he so obsessed by that young twat, when his mother was clearly offering her own twat--the same twat he came out of--to her darling baby boy? Well, John finally did catch on, but little did he know that he was in for the best fuck of his life--a hot incestuous fuck of his own mom. (It was the best fuck of her life too.) I hope the kid realized how lucky he was. He got what lots and lots of sons only dream of as they whack off--he got his big hard cock up between his mother's legs and, like any son lucky enough to be in the same situation, he was seized by a fuck-frenzy. He fucked the living shit out of his mother, and she just kept on cumming and cumming, like a wild woman. He was having a party up his own mother's cunt, and mom was enjoying the fun as much as John was. When he finally blew his hot young balls and shot his mother full of his warm creamy semen, both mom and son understood what John's big thrusting cock and his heavy loaded balls were for.

It 's impeccably built (spike)

haveing farmed all my life . very old cows will make milk. despite not haveing a calf

this is the 2ond time of reading wow !!!! I wonder if story is a true ??? seams so factual. and cow will give milk , espctuly old ones

From fucking your mom hope you got her pregnant.my goal to get my mom pregnant and even my aunt mom's sister.i know I ruined my aunt's marriage because we both went on vacation together.we end up at nudist resort on carribean island.told my aunt time for you to strip your clothes off.she said what do think of me and I said woman walking around naked showing off her body with big tits and dark brown nipples plus that hairy cunt between your legs.took off mine she just looked at me and her mouth dropped when she saw how big I was.just walked up to her took her tube top off and her shorts and panties looked at her just said I'm going love fucking you tonight.she was near the bed so pushed her on her back got on top shoved my cock in her cunt and she screamed when pushed in her one hard thrust.told her my goal is to get you pregnant and make sure I do.so fucked her hard getting ready to cum she said don't cum in me.then I knew her tubes weren't fixed and just looked at her when started to unload in her.once I finished told let's go want that cum to leak out of you so people will know you got fucked and I even told her after having six kids pop out you why not make it #7.told her I even got my mom pregnant too.549a

Oooh, aren't you a big widdle boy? What is your level of maturity 10 or LOWER? sunny (notice the intentional lack of a capital "s"), after all of this destruction, would you man enough to support all of these people, mother, aunts, kids. (notice that I refused to include you as I could not care less about your well being - wondering, can you earn enough riding on the back end of a garbage truck?) or are you what your comments depict, just a little jerk of a kiddy (aka a widdle boy) totally lacking in morality and and would plan to dump all of your adult responsibilities on society?

As a writer and a fan of the mother/son niche, I enjoyed this thoroughly. Nice pacing and an appropriate amount of self-doubt on both the mother and son's part. 5-stars.

Fortunately no sand was abused in the making of this story.

It just rubs in the wrong places at the worst times 😂😎

Wow! Loved the detailed description. Hard to do well and you nailed it.

Loved the way you built the sexual tension here. Lots of ogling and frolicking in the sea, an inadvertent erection sandwiched in his mother's arse cleavage. It's inevitable when a young lad goes to the beach with his hot mother.

Lack of clothes and too much physical contact will always stir forbidden emotions and you detailed it very well here. Bravo. 5 *

Hope you start writing again!

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I LOVED YOUR STORY, BUT YOU ENDED IT TO SOON.

WHAT HAPPENED WHEN THEY WENT HOME???

DID THEY KEEP GOING???

DID THEY STOP? WHAT HAPPENED???????????????????

PLEASE LET ME KNOW. (rjb49@bellsouth.net)

Great story with lots of sexual tension.