All Comments on 'At The Movies: After The Show'

Your series has been just hot beyond anything I have read in here in years. Please continue as you have several different directions you can go. Please use them with your great writing ability. besttom69@cs.com

Dawn:

Your story is great and the next one should be titled with your name. You have the ability to write and the imagination to create, a perfect combination. Please continue to entertain us with it

The writing is very good - the sex is very arousing - the sudden wifely reaction to change onto a bi-slut and the husbands non-reaction or ambivelance both seem contrived. Is that what you intended?? Not restained or any weapons shown the non-reative complient husband seems to be leaning towards wussie wimpy - is that what you intended?

Confused directions for marital / non-consent story.

i see no reason for you to stop. we haven't even found out if Sally and Joan get to have Diane again or what happens to all of them.

This was the best I have read in a long time. Keep up the GOOD work I will be looking to see what is next!!!!

This is the best series of stories I have read in a long time. I even showed it to my wife. Please continue. Would like to know if husband ever gets his day at play. Would be a way to seal the deal.

but, please, just for a fan, remember that a SOLE goes on a shoe and it's a SOUL that goes to the devil!

Please write more so the sick motherfuckers who read and enjoy your shitty efforts can whack off.

Great story. I'm looking forward to parts 4 and 5.... I want to see if the two lesbians get another chance with her, and to see if the other guys get a shot as well.

What a great story. I was hard from the beginning i read all 3 stories. I wish that happened to my wife and i.

Great well written series but the ending was abrupt. Please return to it.

very hot, I just loved it, and I hope you continue the story, I almost came in my jeans reading it. Please at least one more chapter

The abrupt stop here doesn't really make sense. After everything else that's happened, to stop the storyline before the promised lesbian three-some, or why Jed lied to Sally and Joan about letting them have a go at Diane, if that was going to be the case, was a bit of a start. Even at that, you should have, as well, ended with, at least, a day after, where John and Diane, over breakfast, took a long, reflective look back over the past night's events. A look to see where things stood between them, and where they were going from there - like maybe another night out to a different theater, or some such thing. Except for the way things ended so up in the air, so to speak, this is really a hot, hot, story! Great writing!

You write GREAT non-con stories. I'd like it if you'd right one similar to this, only have it be with a brother and sister. Have them be threatened and/or blackmailed into putting on a show for their blackmailers/threateners and made to enjoy it. Having the sister get pregnant from it would be a great bonus.

Next chapter soon please

Love it

As I copied it to my "library", I modified it slightly to keep the woman as a very reluctant participant. Wonderful. I hope you keep writing!

I'm writing this fourteen years after your story was published, and I guess you never did get to a part four. I don't know if you'll even see this comment, but if you do, you have one fan who would love to see part four. In the meantime, perhaps I can enjoy your other stories, now that I've found you on Literotica! -- JB Edwards

I like your storyline of Diane being turned into a slut. Wonder where you take it from here. Thanks

Very hot series. I don't usually go for the over the top non-consent, but I really enjoyed this one. At the end of the day she had great sex. Another chapter to round out the story would be great.

Fantastic. Dont you dare turn the evil lil' mind of yours off. This story deserves it proper ending. Thank you

fucking hot cant help but wonder if any other women or couples have had experiences like this

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