by HeyAll
Mmmmm. Thank you, may I have another? Hit all the correct spots for me. The slow, steady and soft progression of character development and action was excellent for the tone you were setting. I would definitely enjoy more of this story, especially with the positive tone. We romantic kinksters need action, too.
I really liked the way that the whole episode unfolded slowly - like it should, and I hope like it would. There was a gradual development of the characters as the story went on. Too many others just get to the sexual part straight away, - you didn't, and I liked that. I hope that the development of this story will go deeper and deeper in bondage as you write the next account. I will be looking for it!
Leo - from Brisbane in Australia
This is but another "twist" upon the old adage from a director to a young, budding actress: "you can't portray emotion until you experience emotion."
Well written, although I would not say that the characters were "developed"
This is one of the best BDSM stories I've read in a long time. I found no grammatical errors, which is a turn on in itself. As a reader it helps me to just enjoy the story without causing me to pause to make small edits and restructure sentences. I also enjoyed your BDSM style. I've been staying away from BDSM labeled stories lately. However, your work just turned me back on to the subject, thank you!
She Charted Her Path For Her BDSM Novel and Professor is Providing Direction and 'Real Life' Experience! Never Read This Done So Well! Thanks!
that was amazing. as a curious sub myself this was a sexy eye opener for me.
It's really great, very well written and just a right balance between sensuality and eroticism. Great story. Thanks for sharing!
Oh wow. I really enjoyed this story. Giving me all sorts of desires...i've just started experiencing light boundages.
Josie
This appears to be a Dom versing of the story- Bondage Professor and co-ed. There was more involved but it had a lot of similarities.
Only one sentence seeed odd, wasn’t sure if it was in the wrong place or if it alluded to sex with her roommate; it referred to her being naked in her dorm room putting her laptop away and wanting something to eat with lots of calories?
Just perfect! It honestly doesn’t get any better. I definitely subscribe to the concept of mutual pleasure in BDSM
Tess (UK)
Yeah! for stories with gentle mentor Doms who take their job seriously. Writing is clean too, without typos and that gives you 5 stars.