by DocWords
Hot..superhot.
Maybe he is more interested in shelley big tits.
Love if glen & shelley have two alone than threesome, atleast at first
As a huge fan of the audio category here on Literotica, I would love to hear this story done by some of the popular artists. I could clearly “hear it” as I read it. Great work as usual from you.
Excellent composition, well edited for typos, etc. and super hot! So many Literotica stories are very poor in comparison. But this excels! I’m drooling to hear a continuing account of the three of them fucking their brains out together! Please keep up the great work!
who the hell is "Brenda" that was suddenly in the sex scene? I found only one word error so the polish on the story is good. I like the story and the way it was told. I've read much of your works and found it good. This, was better. The closing needs some work. She finds out her daughter is fucking her dad and wants to join. NO, complaints just is his dick that big? No curiosity of how he got in her pants. No anger. And what, she just assumed that dad did erotic books? Further, the time period is a bit extraneous for mom to not suspect funny business and is supposedly satisfied with the elf BS. That would make mom daughter stupid which clearly by her stated observations in the end scene she's not. Just some food for thought when you construct the next.
Another well earned "5". Looking forward to how hot to trot Shelley is and what secrets they find out about her and where they lead
In the words of Gomer Pyle."Go-olly sargedog1". Brenda is the name of the grand daughter in the script that Autumn and grandad Glen are reading.Pay attention to the bits between the sex scenes.
Thought that the story was great and that Shelley (mom) figured it out is a great set up for the sequel but the part of her trying to get away from Grandpa and rolling off the bed killed me ( and I've seen that before ) great work
Well written, and although incest is not my favourite genre, this one worked perfectly. Sequel?
Have to admit I stopped reading in the first paragraph when it said the woman could imitate the voice of a small child.
This did not make me want to continue.