All Comments on 'Augmentation Ch. 02'

JL, I really do love your stories, you write like no one else here, & I always look forward to seeing anything new from you... but this one, for whatever reasons, is just not as gripping as your other stories. Maybe the weird permutations are so far out as to be just that, far fucking out!, but still not as erotic as your other stuff -- at least that's my take. Not complaining really, as I enjoy your imagination, but would love to feel grabbed & provoked by your creative vision & the detailed emotions & sensations that you usually evoke so well. Carry on! We be lovin' you!

If this is a glimpse of the future, I can hardly wait. Any more chapters in the pipeline?

Well that was definitely different! I liked it! 5stars!

That was an incredible story . The first of yours I have read . I'll be reading a lot more . Thanks . Well done .