All Comments on 'Aunt Brini Ch. 04'

it was great and all but in my opnion too short. and y did u bother mentioning the other toys if i dont even bother using them? but over all good story but much too long for all the detail u put into it(im not complaining about the detail just the overal length of the story) NEEDS TO BE LONGER!!!!!!! lol

love a happy ending

it gave me such an erection that i felt like bursting but it also made me feel good

you have a talent for this and should consider a full length book :)

WOW!

Same as the last comment, Wow. Nice job.

I hope you write some more?

I enjoyed the contrast of the two sides of Jack's personality. He could be both a strict Master with a contrasting caring and sensitive side as well.

You used some good character development in creating your characters. Displaying her thoughts and explaining the conflicts she was felling as she developed feelings for Jack. Although I would have enjoyed hearing what Jack was feeling during his controlling and taking her Aunt Brini.

Over all though I feel this is the best chapter of this series of chapters in this story line. You have a talent please keep writing!