by rmcgee
Super fun chapter. All his pregnant women swelling up will be such a turn on to get them pregnant again.
Wow, four unwanted or unplanned pregnancies with women he can't marry or support.
What is the narrator doing, trying out for the NBA? :) :)
Good thing this story has passed from the realm of unlikely but sorta plausible in a high school fantasy sort of way, to full blown farce.
Please read what you write carefully. You use the wrong verb forms a mix up many homonyms. (e.g. site for sight)
Agree with another's comment that we've passed beyond the realm of "believable", but still a fun read. At least try to keep the character's reaction and emotions as real as possible given the very unreal story arc. Giving it 5*, but it's getting harder to justify that high of a rating...
So in the first posting of this series, Aunt K.K. sneaks into my room, you had the MC have a younger sister that was never named, as well as K.K.'s daughters that were never named. Well all three were never named to m knowledge, so can we get names for the 3, also will the younger sister of the MC get some action with big brother? Also any plans for the Message Palor girl, Amanada, and Jill?
Yall are over thinking it. The story has the beginning of a harem going on. Now he needs to takes charge or his women and tame the slut cousin. If it ain't your thing don't knock the man's story the rest of us are waiting for more so don't discourage him
Come on. Too far fetch. No young man is that lucky. To get his mom pregnant. And then her two sisters? And then his cousin? Please.
Of all the women I would like to have seen him just get his mother pregnant and if they both love one another.....then they work it out. They have the baby and they make many more.
At this point,or any point after the first chapter you could have dropped the word aunt every time you mentioned a name - we would get it. Cathy, KK would be sufficient. Please get a dictionary or a proof reader.
Loved this chapter sounds like he's got a harem and who else is gonna get pregnant???" 5 stars