by Moondrift
Well plotted and executed, good character development. Good work
I have always enjoyed reading your stories - they paint a beautiful picture of the landscape and lovely portrayal of the characters, so much so, the reader is easily drawn in,
Venus
I love the story line, well layed out. Nice build up and great ending. I love to read your writings. Keep up the great work.
If I have any regret at all, it is simply the wish that it had been longer. Thank you for a really fine story.
Damn good story, but some of the most horrible editing I have seen by you. You're better than that, man. C'mon.
It still rates a 4 from me otherwise.
They have different last names and therefore could go to any foreign country and get married using their passports as ID. Even a foreign registry ship would be sufficient.
More or less, have skipped a few, gone back etc. I will leave you now but will read more of them tomorrow or the next day. Thank you for writing some lovely, romantic stories and for the mother/son incest (which is, as you know, the very best kind).
so glad they found each other and became a couple....vice is nice but incest is best....just how it should be......
Although I was equally as taken away by this story but damn this was disturbing. I have no words to describe it. It's a great story anyhow.
This is the second story of yours that I've read and I must say this is a much better story than the first. Well done. 5 stars this time. Can't wait to read more.
There was no telling of how he was continuing medical studies, nor how she continued with the business that she had. The day to day. All said, I was left with the feeling that I had heard their story. I did not like a note in his character....how he talked dismissively of women that he had fucked in the past,and could have over,no trouble. Past lovers should be fondly remembered,their struggles to get us over the fence...and the things we did to them.
I wish the story as longer and had more detail. You could easily married then off if you wanted, they both would have had different surnames if I’m not mistaken. Even flown to Las Vegas or somewhere. But anyway still a ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ story...
Great Incest Love story, I agree with others that marriage should have been in the story as well as the birth. Maybe the author would extend the story to a chapter 2. Gets my 5 star vote
Terrific story!! I too was adopted but my birth-mother passed away when I was very young. So sad I never got to meet her. :-(