by TheEarl
Loved it; sure was exciting. I must do this tonight. She made me very hotttttt. Wish I had, been there to help her.Would of been fun, sure would. I am a female, would love another female. I know shes straight, but this is 2004.
Very hot. I could feel the cool air, feel her anticipation. It made me so horny, I had to go get my vibrator :) Nice job. How does a man write a woman's orgasm so well, hmmmm?
It's amazing the hot scene you can create with just a few words. Have you thought of writing a "how to"... along these lines?
OMG that was sooo sexy! You have a way with words! Dont listen to the other people who tell you other wise!
OMG!!! I was using my dildo all the way through the story!! I have never cum so much in my life!